Behind Closed Doors
Jef Aérosol à Paris Shush quiet Can you hear ? Your closest neighbours Screaming in fear Vibrating through the earthly still A blood curling, piercing, spine chilling,shrill, Behind close doors where few may peek May live a hideous inhuman freak, Only here in human form Waiting patiently for a new moon to dawn, Then its fangs will appear organically His thirst for blood will grip him manically So your neighbour who you greet Say hello too each time you meet, May not be all he seems, So shush quiet Can you hear Your neighbour Scream |
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I'm so glad he's not my neighbour :)
ReplyDeleteNice prose.
sharp, powerful words.
ReplyDeletewell deserved award,
Yikes!!!
ReplyDeleteI'm putting in my earplugs so I won't hear anything. Good poem.
ReplyDeletePowerfully written. Great stuff.
ReplyDeleteHere is my entry:
http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/this-is-my-mug.html
Scary! Good write!
ReplyDeletereality exposed shockingly-great write
ReplyDeletewell written...
ReplyDeletewow amazing and yet so true. I am now in America for a small stay and I see this around here all the time. On the TV here they say that you have no idea who your neighbor is and what he does behind closed doors. On the islands I do not worry for this one and we all know who are neighbors are and it is so peaceful and calm there I do not worry about this at home. Cheers
ReplyDeletehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/20/taken-from-me-on-halloween-night/
creepy.
ReplyDeletegood luck.
Halloween inspired?
ReplyDeleteDefinitely scary.
creepy,
ReplyDeleteyou could share this with tomorrow''s poetry picnic.
keep inspiring, thanks for the solid support along the way.
:)
Fantastic spine tingler!
ReplyDeleteScary! Brilliantly written too
ReplyDeleteHonestly terrifying, but fantastic!
ReplyDeleteQuite a neighbour. Great job. You'll find mine here.
ReplyDeleteSo true! From now on I will never ever look behind close doors again ;-). Great poem! I found it on Rachel's Smiley Sociology Study #10 and here is what I wrote for it: http://phoenixrisesagain.wordpress.com/2011/11/03/closing-doorstueren-schliessen/
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! Sorry it took me a while to get here. :) Thanks for participating in the study! :)
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