Mice And Men
Photo In New York Times Jan 23rd 2012 We the mice run around play nice, Sniffing out a living Scurrying about, forever giving, To them the men who tax us again and again, They who can't lose, Even when they've been accused Of Lying and cheating, Squandering Our resources, Which then forces us To limit our heating, Change our habits in eating, Move our location Affecting our nation ! We the mice care for our young, Nurturing and feeding, Limiting our breeding, While them the men receive big bungs, FOR Lying, deceiving, To brainwash us into believing , Their excuses and lies, We should give them our vote, Cause more strife, raise human anxiety, As they further bankrupt and demote, Our Society ! Submitted to Gooseberry Goes Poetic whose prompt was to pick a headline from the New York Times |
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Very good this opinion. My patience with politicians is already exhausted. Much injustice in this big world of the Good God.
ReplyDeleteprofound demonstrations, well done.
ReplyDeletenice! very well expressed!
ReplyDeleteour society is complicated and sad too many times!
ReplyDeleteYour piece was honest and true... very beautiful!
quite some political poetry in the pub tonight... but honestly...the small mice can gain quite a bit of influence if they stand up for what they think is right...it always was like this in history..and this is good..
ReplyDeleteexcellent bit of socio political commentary...witht he state of the union tonight several of us seem to have latched on to the feelings we have for what is happening...great stuff kez!
ReplyDeleteMost politicians will give you the moon to be elected, then, sell your soul to the devil once they are in. Most are the same in all parties. Nicely said.
ReplyDeleteNice commentary - speaks loud and clear
ReplyDeleteHere! Here! Tell it, Poetess! Love your voice in this one! (Not that I don't always...but there is some power here!)
ReplyDeletePoetry definitely is a good way to get one's feelings out, I think! I hear your thoughts loud and clear here.
ReplyDeleteA well written piece, kez. Never give up!
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Bravo! I highly commend what you are doing here.
ReplyDeleteI loved the poem and commned your word, I also like the rhythm I detected throughout. My poem "Dissonance" echoes in some regards your sentiments http://shinkendelfenix.wordpress.com/2011/06/12/dissonance/
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