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Monday, 30 May 2011

God is a Rap Star

A bit different for me and kind of experimental 

God is a Rap Star 

gather round the hood, 
this gig's gonna be loud 
gonna be well good 
Gonna make us well proud! 
cos 
god is a rap star!

gather round the hood 
the vibe is heavy,dark
gonna be wicked, it should !
gonna rain hard,gonna need an ark!
cos
 god is a rap star 

gather round the hood 
there's a rumble in our jungle
Gonna be mega, it could!
Gonna flash,gonna spangle!
cos
 god is a rap star! 

its wicked in the hood 
flashes and mega loud, 
chillin in the rain ,its good!
a wicked thunderous crowd 
cos 
god is a rap star!



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16 comments:

  1. Claudia30 May 2011 at 17:08

    ha nice rhymes and flow to this..think if god starts to rap who knows what would happen..smiles

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  2. Victoria30 May 2011 at 17:59

    I love it!!! What a fun way of looking at the prompt, and at God!

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  3. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall30 May 2011 at 18:16

    very prideful thoughts.
    well done.

    :)

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  4. Liz Rice-Sosne30 May 2011 at 20:56

    Totally loved this. Really well done.

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  5. Anonymous30 May 2011 at 21:52

    Experimental is good! I like the rhythm and the surprise the words offer: "gonna rain hard, gonna need an ark!" You are a star!

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  6. Tashtoo31 May 2011 at 12:46

    Didn't see the prompt..but thought this was great! You can never go wrong stepping outside the comfort zone...good/god usually shows up as the result! :)

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  7. planetcyberluz31 May 2011 at 14:23

    Good rythme and rhyme on an original idea. I enjoyed it.
    Tigerbrite

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  8. Anonymous31 May 2011 at 14:56

    This does have a nice flow and its fun!

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  9. Luke Prater31 May 2011 at 20:20

    What a concept! Alway worth experimenting.. I do constantly... I think you produced an interesting and entertaining piece

    Cheers

    Luke @ WordSalad

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  10. ayala31 May 2011 at 21:20

    Cool...a rap star :)

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  11. Rachel Hoyt1 June 2011 at 03:38

    LOL. What a fun idea! :)

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  12. Ms. Queenly1 June 2011 at 06:17

    I do kinda off hope god isn't a rap star, but this is a really cute piece. ~MsQ

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  13. Anonymous1 June 2011 at 14:39

    Very clever take on whom you see as 'God'
    I think God is who or whatever we see him/her/it as. I persoannly have never thought of God as being an elderly man with a long white flowing beard. Stolen from the Greek Gods (aka as Zeus) I think of God as an energy, a power of light and love and, I think God is loud when it choses to be, Thunder storms etc....another kind of rap.....LOL
    Very nice and original piece.

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  14. Felicitas2 June 2011 at 01:48

    This was pure fun and truly original!

    Thanks for visiting me earlier - it's always nice to meet other poets.

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  15. James Rainsford2 June 2011 at 09:28

    I can hear the innate rhythm in this piece. It is crying out to be performed. Great job!

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  16. Anonymous6 June 2011 at 21:46

    Love the beat to this. As James said, this could be performed.

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