Standing Before you
I stand before you immortalized forever in marble cold as stone
I stand before you with all I have
Feelings, emotions, sorrow reflected
By the mantle I own,
It stands for love and passion
I stand before you
Forever in cold stone love
My love
Stands before you !
Submitted to One Stop Poetry
Picture courtesy of Walter Parada many thanks
This is a very interesting perspective on the picture - cold stone love - original and emotive.
ReplyDeletejust what every woman needs a man made of stone...ha. a tribute to our lave, maybe...but i dont know if a statue of myself would go over well for my anniversary this week...smiles.
ReplyDeletemarble and cold...a fitting description of the hard bodied warrior standing forever.
ReplyDeleteThe warrior left when all have crumbled into dust
ReplyDeleteThis makes me think of an aquarian friend that I love dearly, that can be and appear sooooooo remote and cold and hard, and then, I see that mirror. The ways people express or allow or define vulnerability is simply amazing, and then our own reactions to what we might view as a lack or a rejection! This one spoke to my personal experiences inside and out thank you!
ReplyDeleteAn interesting take on the picture. Nice.
ReplyDeletewhat passionate words.good work
ReplyDeleteI like your take on the picture. Nice piece!
ReplyDeleteYour words pleasant like the breeze...
ReplyDeletePassion and love in these words fondly freeze..
Wonderful poetry ! :)
Solid, passionate.
ReplyDeleteSounds like strong, solid love! Hooray!
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