This Little ditty is written on my Daughters Birthday ( who is loved lots ) she is to be married next year to a lovely chap So this dedicated to her.
For Amy
My Pre-Raphaelite child,
With her tonal golden hair,
With her tonal golden hair,
A face illuminated by her smile,
Her demeanour totally unaware.
My Pre- Raphaelite Teen,
With her tonal golden hair,
Her body entombed in jeans,
A style she wore with flair!
My Pre- Raphaelite woman,
With your tonal golden hair,
Your love of life your omen,
A gift if ever to share !
My Pre- Raphaelite offspring,
With your tonal golden hair,
A love date set for your wedding
To a groom who loves to care !
What more could we wish for
My Pre-Raphaelite Child !
Submitted to:One Shot Wednesday
Kerry! This is wonderful! I dare say it's yours that may put mine to shame! I like how you keep the phrase from start to end, and the pic is lovely! Your "baby" girl is beautiful, and hope her road ahead is filled with lots of love! Make sure her prince knows just how lucky he is :)and send birthday wishes her way from me!
ReplyDeletebig smiles. congrats to her and you...and a nice walk through the ages...her love of life is inspiring...smiles.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant I wonder if I'll be writing poetry for my little seven year old in years to come! Gorgeous girl you have Kez, she looks like a joy to be around and you're obviously very proud of her!
ReplyDeleteA lovely tribute to your daughter! Your love shines through...delightful... :)
ReplyDeleteAmy must feel very honored by your writing, I loved it and enjoyed it a lot. I hope my mom feels something like that when I get married... me, as a child, would love to read soemthing like that.
ReplyDeleteabsolutely lovely, your poem exudes love and the most brilliant celebrations of life, your daughter, and she will cherish your words and keep them in her heart...always...
ReplyDeletethe sweetest love...
sincerely,
Taking a walk through the ages
ReplyDeleteYet remaining on the same pages
With the first little bit
Really adds joy to what you writ
Nice tribute indeed
And a great read
Your poem provides many snap shots of your daughter growing up. Lovely write. Happy Birthday and congrats!
ReplyDeletealways sweet to reflect of the wonderful-ness of our children, lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThe emotion shines through, and so the cycle contines
ReplyDeletePre-Raphaelite child......Such a lovely image. And such a beautiful poem about a daughter growing up. Must be absolutely delightful to witness such a miracle....This is beautiful!
ReplyDeletethe joys of it.. I have no children.. will I ever, I cannot say... but certainly appreciate this
ReplyDeleteWarmest Salad
Luke
really lovely ~ what a gorgeous photo of your beautiful daughter ~ and a wedding to come ~ so exciting ~ your pre raphelite queen ~ a bride to be ~ 'with a groom that cares' ~ couldn't ask for more ~ beautiful ~ Lib x
ReplyDeleteI love that pic of your daughter! Congrats to the bride and to you, Kez. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is just gorgeous and I love the repetition. Beautiful daughter you have =)
ReplyDeleteAaaaw!!
ReplyDeleteMany Happy Returns of the Day!
loved the pic and words..
hugs xoxox
Lovely and sweet, I can feel your happyness through your words!
ReplyDeleteFantastic word usage to bring up images into one's mind - great write!
ReplyDeletewhat a prideful entry,
ReplyDeleteyou and your girl are blessed.
Thanks for the treat.
Happy Rally.
Ah that's lovely kerry - wish them both well for the wedding. X
ReplyDeleteWonderful, wonderful, wonderful....
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