Sanctuary
Floral heady scents waft in my head,
Slowly up to my sanctuary I tread,
As I enter my meditation place,
A feeling of peace caresses my face.
The candlelit scene calms my soul,
Escaping from life, in societies fish bowl.
I submerge my self in my scented elixir,
Craving the feeling of soft downy cashmere
I anoint my body in luxurious potions,
Then gently massage with expensive lotions.
As warm steam embraces my being,
The worries and woes of the day begin thinning.
Cleansed both in spirit, soul and mind
As with the bath water the days demons left behind.
For this self indulgent vanity,
Is the saviour for my sanity!
Many thanks for the award I'm delighted to accept it
I would like to nominate Ice queen http://myfrozenworld.wordpress.com/2011/07/01/my-journey-to-life/
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great.
ReplyDeletedeep words.
powerful delivery.
Nice words well written :)
ReplyDeletehere here, sometimes a long soak is exactly what we all need!
ReplyDeleteRefreshing use of rhyme.
ReplyDeleteHEAVEN! Now I want champagne and a bubble bath!
ReplyDeleteOh, yeah, sounds lovely.
ReplyDeleteI love a good old fashion soak.
ReplyDeleteSounds so nice and relaxing. We should all pamper ourselves sometimes and each other too =)
ReplyDeleteThis is very cool, Thank you, much appreciated, WS
ReplyDeletePerfect - the only thing missing is my rubber duck!
ReplyDeletevery enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteVery nice...calm
ReplyDeleteZQ
Great write. I loved the word choices that really help embrace the calm.
ReplyDeleteWilliam
scented elixer .... soft downy cashmere ..
ReplyDeleteMMmmm ... I like these descriptive words. You poem is very sensual. I enjoyed it.
Very nice,
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/11/14/could-love-find-her-again/
Nice one... I love the idea of the bath being the savior of sanity--- strange how a little hot water can change the perspective of crappy days :-D
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