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Wednesday 30 March 2011

Human Atomics

Human Atomics

We're in a room, hitting the walls
The worlds not round its like a hall,
People can't breathe, they're walking the walls
Their ideas keep crashing and having fights. 
If only one of them could see the light

The hall's so long and people can't see,
Their ideas so small they need to be freed !
Lets knock down the wall,
So people can see, let their ideas breathe,
Then hopefully they'll see the worlds much bigger

And its not just me !



16 comments:

  1. love this,

    brilliant writing,

    The hall's so long and people can't see,
    Their ideas so small they need to be freed !
    Lets knock down the wall,
    So people can see,let their ideas breathe,

    powerful........

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  2. The worlds not round its like a hall...
    The hall's so long and people can't see..

    wonderful thought... luv the simile

    nice msg too

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  3. Nice message. See the wider picture.

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  4. oh my god! this is so very good! i love the strength in the words! keep it up!

    please check mine too: "Beyond Silent Wars"

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  5. what a beautiful and powerful poem! yes, if only one of us could see the light...

    thanks for your nice comment on my blog. :)

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  6. Sounds like the words of an orator.
    Good going!

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  7. beautiful concept and thought! well written! :)

    Rally Week 41 - My Poetry

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  8. um....
    I choose..
    D. All the above!
    you wonderful poet you!

    Luna

    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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  9. Life sure is a shape shifter, straight and twisting roads. I love the concept here!

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  10. welcome join us again.

    will place your link in our blog roll within a week.

    super busy these 3 days.

    smiles.

    A++

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  11. Tear down the walls as the song says. I enjoyed this Kerry. Thank you

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  12. Rhyme and free verse blend together for an informal structure here--thanks for linking up and participating today, Kerry.

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  13. nicely played, why do we fight? is it the walls we create that narrow our perspective to a hall...i like this...

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  14. May the hyper-active collisions come to an end! Wonderful write, the tempo and architecture flowed wonderfully. ~ Rose

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  15. Love this. We should always be out there trying to knock down walls! :-)

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